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Untitled-To Johnny Rocwell

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I stop at the corner. Billboards above me, giant advertisements all telling me what I want and need. As if something materialistic like cologne or the latest watch could bring happiness to the human soul; fools. It all came down to money and power, and that is what this city fed on: power over the people. If I were young this is when I would have dreamt of heroes. I looked upward at the menacing red letters in the neon sign. Pharmaceutical corporations, this generation's Jesus.

(This is from my first graphic novel script. It's still untitled. I'm about 88 pages into it. It's complicated so I'm going to revise it again. I was a biotech student back in the day so I'm trying to make parts of this as real as possible. Thought I'd share.) :flirty:
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2748x3547px 1.32 MB
Make
EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model
KODAK EASYSHARE M1063 DIGITAL CAMERA
Shutter Speed
1/399 second
Aperture
F/5.5
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Sep 6, 2010, 12:12:30 PM
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This is what I mean. Just this makes me want to read more...to know everything involved in this story and world. Reading this makes me want to know what happened to this character to make them this way...and what lies ahead for them. This little passage shows more personality than most of the characters in a lot of the trash that's published now.

...I need more.